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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Armonia, Mar 19, 2012. Replies: 5 | Views: 627

  1. Armonia

    Armonia Poeta veterana

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    Feather
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    Walk the wind
    take your dream
    silence sings
    defeated sad memories.

    But you, little bird in flight
    do not miss the smile.

    Flaps on the sidewalk
    show your eyes to heaven
    the sun keeps your words
    darkness does not touch you.
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    Armonia, Mar 19, 2012
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  2. LuKaS

    LuKaS L'enfant terrible

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    Enteremante sin desperdicio, pero destaco lo mejor.
    Felicitaciones Isa, has logrado un poema hermoso.
     
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    LuKaS, Mar 19, 2012
  3. ALBUJA BRAVO GUILLERMO

    ALBUJA BRAVO GUILLERMO Exp..

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    ARMONÍA
    Versos con sonrisas que
    salen de tu pluma
    ensoñadora.

    Abrazos y besos quiteños.
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    ALBUJA BRAVO GUILLERMO, Mar 19, 2012
  4. Mary C. López

    Mary C. López Una mujer de líneas y procesos.

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    I liked so much your lines... It´s beautiful.
    Thanks, stars and kisses.
     
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    Mary C. López, Mar 19, 2012
  5. amormejia

    amormejia Poeta veterano en el portal

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    The closing line make this awesome poem a work of art. Once again, you prove to the world the great talent you posses. My sincere congratulations from these, my California grounds.
     
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    amormejia, Mar 19, 2012
  6. SMILEATER

    SMILEATER Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Softly and slowly
    your poem falls on me, Armonie.


    Glad I step by.




    ___________________________________ S.


    PD: Look, there's a "smile" on this poem. :::hug:::
     
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    SMILEATER, Mar 20, 2012

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