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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lordtever, Dec 19, 2007. Replies: 2 | Views: 920

  1. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    Could I love you?
    Could I feel you?
    Would you love me?
    Would you feel me?
    Would you mend my broken heart?
    I know you can
    I see it in your eyes,
    I feel it in my heart,
    You are the one
    that will mend my heart
    and I am the one
    that will fill your need    ​
     
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    lordtever, Dec 19, 2007
  2. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    What delicious confidence that you express in both of you. Asking questions that you already know the answer to. Priceless and so endearing.
     
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    Arana1006, Dec 21, 2007
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    carlic4houston Poeta recién llegado

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    I really like this poem, It has a romantic tone and it is a short message from the heart. I will never write a poem in English, I'm not brave enough I think lol.


    Carli
     
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    carlic4houston, Dec 30, 2007

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