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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Guerrion, Mar 24, 2024. Replies: 5 | Views: 425

  1. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I can immerse
    myself in a range of ideas,
    but undoubtedly, writing to you
    is akin to the sharp edge of a knife.
    However, I write
    because you are the window
    through which I'm able to see you,
    line by line, each day.​
    I write because poems
    are mirrors and I must accept myself,
    be practical, and write without knowing
    whether it will have significance or be forgotten
    in your mind. In the end, I hope you are somewhat
    aware that this is meant for you, that I’m doing well
    without the intricacies of refined poetry, or your presence.
    Fidel Guerra. March 24, 2024​
    .​
     
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  2. Alde

    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Muchos nos sumergimos en esa variedad de ideas y tenemos el mismo fin.

    Saludos
     
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  3. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Alde,
    gracias por tu visita y comentar y dejar la primera marca o huella en la obra de este humilde escritor, que muchas veces lucha con la ortografía y la expresión poética para sobrevivir. Quiero informarte que he recibido este humilde poema, del que hoy gustas luego de realizar ofrendas al Dios de la literatura, entre ellas luciérnagas, pinacates y algún que otro cangrejo enamorado. Tu comentario realmente me alegra, es como una alegre música, especialmente en pinche lunes. Even though I don't know you, I have a feeling that you are not only an excellent commentator, and person, but also a magnificent poet. I appreciate you for your continuous support.

    Take care,
    Fidel Guerra.
     
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    Luciana Rubio Poeta veterano en el portal

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    It is a really nice poem, Fidel, I like read it. Have a good day.
     
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Dear Luciana,
    I wish to extend my heartfelt appreciation to you for this,
    and for the many comments and encouragement you have given me.


    I am proud to be conectado contigo in creating versos and adding encanto
    al mundo de la poesía. Es increíble que una misma poesía, sin definición, como la mía,
    pueda o suela ofrecerme comentarios que, humildemente agradezco...with sighs that reach so far….


    Thanks and muchos abrazos,
    not the typical hugs, pero
    los más sentidos.


    Fidel Guerra.
     
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    Luciana Rubio Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Gracias, me gustan esos abrazos, igual muchos for you.
     
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