First Time

Este es el primer poema que escribi y aunque parezca extraño no es en mi idioma nativo el español...me es de cierta manera mas facil escribir en el idioma ingles...

FIRST TIME

A fire,
a candle burning
thy smell of perfume arising
a pale moon reflecting on a window pane
and the night still playing with the last colors of a dying day
while the whisper of satin falling
breaks the silence, wakes my senses

Child,
your breath embracing
the air that flows there trembling
and my own self, fervid of desire is awaiting
the contact of your arms about my expecting flesh
thee gently push me backwards
I close my eyes, our time is endless

Mild,
nimble hands outlining
those plains that once were naked
I look at thee, silently your perfume fading
and a single smile is the prelude that gentle
cries out mightier than the thunder
I am yours, this night forever!

I sigh,
Deep valleys, virgin dunes
your wild geography unveils majestic
while deep shadows that seem reflected
from years of forbidden wishes, taboos compelled
step aside not intefering
now deep inside, be mine, stay helpless

 

[center:c3ec6aa7d1]I like it. :wink:
Pa' mi aveces es mas facil tambien escribir en ingles,
Pero el español suena mucho mas lindo, creo.
Ahora escribo mas en español,
Pero hablo el ingles muchoooo mejor. :wink:
Cuidate...[/center:c3ec6aa7d1]

 

no puedo opinar. porque el ingles como que no lo entiendo.