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forbidden sweetness

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Cris Ryan, Jul 15, 2021. Replies: 2 | Views: 463

  1. Cris Ryan

    Cris Ryan artesano de versos maravillosos

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    I bring in my mind

    —in my heart too—

    a strange destiny

    caught in the same

    old

    never enough spent love.


    I do not forget

    the resonance of her

    sensual kisses;

    —rockets exploded! —

    neither the ecstasy of

    our two shades in a guilt

    in reciprocal agitation.


    We were in our paradise

    until something had broken

    actually, a bad fate had arisen

    she left me to meet her partner.


    Maybe everything

    went too far… so fast…

    promises without demands.


    Maybe now is the opportunity

    to leave our things

    in the divine past.


    Time of hope for us

    time will revive a new light:

    vulnerable eternity

    insufficient reality.

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  2. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    Cris, don't ever forget, save it where nothing can ever take it aaway,
    nice to be able to read your verses tonight...

    xoxox
     
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  3. Cris Ryan

    Cris Ryan artesano de versos maravillosos

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    Guadalupe, thanks for su anwer to my poem, I made many versions, I had many doubts before to decide to publish my poem, this was my first intent to write a poem in English, it was writen 37 years ago. Thanks.
     
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