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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Lunacyrcus, Jun 24, 2012. Replies: 1 | Views: 557

  1. Lunacyrcus

    Lunacyrcus Poeta recién llegado

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    Between the apple-blossoms
    Some butterflies were flying around
    And I sought you in the dark
    And I sought you in the rain
    But was I out of my mind?
    When I saw you standing there

    Was it insane to wait for you to hold me
    And the things inside my head
    Are the things you once told me

    Ridiculous thoughts
    Kept lying in my mind
    Kept sweet torturing inside
    Kept hoping for some things to die

    Between the apple-blossoms
    Some mystery was lying around
    And I sought you in the dark
    And I sought you in the rain
    But was I out of my mind?
    When I heard you call my name
     
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    Lunacyrcus, Jun 24, 2012
  2. donatien

    donatien Invitado

    Well, my english is not the very best but, for what i can see, quiet simple text, sounds more like a song than a poem -to me-.
    Glad to make it through the Babel Tower harmless.
     
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    donatien, Jun 25, 2012

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