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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by CriisBelen, Jan 24, 2015. Replies: 4 | Views: 813

  1. CriisBelen

    CriisBelen Poeta adicto al portal

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    I'm looking at the mirror
    as tears fall over my face,
    and time keeps running away.
    Then I lay down on my bed
    and remember the day we said:
    We will be just fine.
    There's no need to try,
    let's say good bye.
     
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    CriisBelen, Jan 24, 2015
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    amormejia Poeta veterano en el portal

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    I'm happy to see you write in English as well. This is very well-thought poem.
     
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    amormejia, Jan 28, 2015
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    CriisBelen Poeta adicto al portal

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    Thank you my dear friend, I'm not used to write in English, but I decided to try at least once :D A big hug for you and have a nice day.
     
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    CriisBelen, Jan 28, 2015
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    Siempre Geralda Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Sometimes... a good bye is the best and only option. Keep on writing!! Many blessings!
     
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    Siempre Geralda, Mar 7, 2015
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    CriisBelen Poeta adicto al portal

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    You're right, sometimes it is. Thank you for reading this small poem. Have a nice day and God bless you :)
     
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    CriisBelen, Mar 7, 2015

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