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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by the.jester, Aug 28, 2012. Replies: 3 | Views: 817

  1. the.jester

    the.jester Poeta recién llegado

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    GUILTY
    (28/08/2012)

    Please forgive me
    There is nothing I could blame
    Maybe something in your gaze
    Maybe something in your voice
    Or the magic of your world

    Please forgive me
    I just couldn't stop my heart
    I just couldn't blind its eyes
    I just couldn't give it wings
    Couldn't hide this love I feel

    Yes I'm guilty
    Of dreaming of you every night
    Of thinking of you all the time
    I'm so guilty

    It's a pity
    That nothing I write makes you fly
    That never your heart will be mine
    [I]I feel empty[/I]

    [I]Please forgive me[/I]
    [I]I just cannot stop my hands[/I]
    [I]Or erase the words they write[/I]
    [I]Cannot keep them just for me[/I]
    [I]Cannot hide this love I feel[/I]

    Yes I'm guilty
    Of dreaming of you every night
    Of thinking of you all the time
    I'm so guilty

    It's a pity
    That nothing I write makes you fly
    That never your heart will be mine
    [I]I feel empty[/I]

    Please forgive
    [I]Those thousands of verses I've written for you[/I]
    [I]Please forgive[/I]
    [I]That absurd insistence of dreaming of you[/I]
    [I]Please forgive[/I]
    [I]me[/I]    ​
     
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    the.jester, Aug 28, 2012
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  2. LUVIAM

    LUVIAM Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Que bellos sentimientos de amor amigo jester!, me maravilla la manera como plasmas en tus letras tanta sensibilidad, mis aplausos todos son para ti esta vez, te felicito y me quedo con este:

    "Sí, soy culpable
    De soñar contigo cada noche
    De pensar en ti todo el tiempo
    Soy tan culpable"...
     
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    LUVIAM, Aug 28, 2012
  3. BlackHess

    BlackHess Poeta recién llegado

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    It's beautiful

    This made me cry

    I loved your poem
     
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    BlackHess, Oct 16, 2012
  4. Mary C. López

    Mary C. López Una mujer de líneas y procesos.

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    No apologizes for love like that,
    but it is also true that you can not force love ...
    I know what I mean ... but I've learned to love without unfair wait, love for the sake of love.
    Beautiful poem, each verse carved in sensitivity, a pleasure.
     
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    Mary C. López, Oct 16, 2012

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