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Haiku XIII

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by J.ORS H., Nov 4, 2011. Replies: 4 | Views: 824

  1. J.ORS H.

    J.ORS H. Poeta fiel al portal

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    Calma sin luna.
    Ya solo se oye el agua
    que cae del árbol.    ​
     
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    J.ORS H., Nov 4, 2011
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Buena observación en tu haiku de hoy...:::banana:::


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    Maramin, Nov 4, 2011
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    kalkbadan Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Excelente el Haiku,
    un saludo y estrellas,
     
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    kalkbadan, Nov 4, 2011
  4. J.ORS H.

    J.ORS H. Poeta fiel al portal

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    Gracias.
    Intentando mejorar la agudeza en mis observaciones.
     
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    J.ORS H., Nov 5, 2011
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    J.ORS H. Poeta fiel al portal

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    Agradecido.
    Un cordial saludo.
     
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    J.ORS H., Nov 5, 2011

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