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Discussion in 'Taller del Haiku' started by José rubiel Amaya Amaya, Feb 21, 2018. Replies: 5 | Views: 1038

  1. José rubiel Amaya Amaya

    José rubiel Amaya Amaya Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Tiempo letal
    termino envejecido
    y luego muero
     
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    José rubiel Amaya Amaya, Feb 21, 2018
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Filosófico poemeto, podría considerarse Zappai.

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    Maramin, Feb 23, 2018
  3. José rubiel Amaya Amaya

    José rubiel Amaya Amaya Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Maramín: Muchas gracias.
     
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    José rubiel Amaya Amaya, Feb 23, 2018
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    MARIANNE MARIAN GONZALES - CORAZÓN DE LOBA

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    muy original, grato leerte
     
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    MARIANNE, Feb 26, 2018
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    Maranne: Muchas gracias. Mayita.
     
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    José rubiel Amaya Amaya, Feb 28, 2018
  6. Ricardo Linares

    Ricardo Linares Invitado

    Hola José, tu obra es un senryu y no un haiku ya que muestras tus sentimientos.
    Un abrazo.
     
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    Ricardo Linares, Mar 24, 2018

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