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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by MASTER LY 22, Sep 22, 2019. Replies: 4 | Views: 321

  1. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Las aves migran
    en bandadas al norte
    grises las nubes.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Sep 22, 2019
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  2. Seisen

    Seisen Poeta adicto al portal

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    Bello Haikú con kigo indirecto y kireyi perfecto.
    Un placer leerte amiga Laly.
    Un abrazo con cariño.
    Matilde.
     
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    Seisen, Sep 24, 2019
  3. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchísimas gracias Seisen. Es un honor para mi recibir tu sabia opinion. Me alegra que te guste. Mis saludos mas cordiales.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Sep 24, 2019
  4. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Describes una imagen preciosa en tu haikú. Un abrazo laly
     
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    María Baena, Sep 24, 2019
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Que alegria que te guste María. un abrazo enorme.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Sep 24, 2019

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