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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by MASTER LY 22, Mar 28, 2020. Replies: 4 | Views: 329

  1. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Primaveral sol.
    El deshielo en la cumbre
    anega el valle.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Mar 28, 2020
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    marlene2m Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Aunque rompa la estructura es un haiku.
    (El deshielo en la cumbre) es kigo indirecto de primavera.
    Bello !!!
    Saludo
     
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    marlene2m, Apr 19, 2020
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    Mary Mura Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Laly bello haiku;)
     
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    Mary Mura, Apr 19, 2020
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias Marlene por tu invaluable enseñanza. Mi agradecimiento y mis saludos mas cordiales.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Apr 20, 2020
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Amiga :))), como siempre feliz por tu visita y muy agradecida. Abrazos y sonrisas.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Apr 20, 2020

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