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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by MASTER LY 22, May 15, 2021. Replies: 10 | Views: 344

  1. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    El colibrí
    liba la flor de maga.
    Corre un hutía.


    Hutia es un roedor del Caribe.
     
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  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Excelente haiku de primavera.

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    spring Sonriendo...

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    Estupendo flash a la naturaleza Laly, me ha encantado.
     
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  4. EllieWoonlon

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    Bello
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Todo mi agradecimiento Maestro Maramin por la felicitación, me alegra enormemente. Buen fin de semana.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias Mireya por tus lindas palabras. Que pases un hermoso fin de semana.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Te agradezco Ellie por tu visita y dejarme saber que te gustan mis versos. Que pase un maravilloso fin de semana.
     
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  8. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Felicidades Laly . Es un precioso Haiku. Un abrazo
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Gracias Maria, fue una grata sorpresa. Un abrazo.
     
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  10. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    La primavera abierta en esa vitalidad donde la naturaleza de envuelve.
    Un exquisito vuelo entre la formalidad del momento sentido. bellissimo.
    saludos amables de luzyabsenta
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Agradezco tu visita Maestro Luzyabseta y tu precioso comentario que tanto disfruto. Un abrazo.
     
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