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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa, Jul 16, 2021. Replies: 7 | Views: 652

  1. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    A good haiku, Lupita.

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  3. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    MAESTRO Maramin, I am very happy that you liked this Haiku, I love figs; even though, I haven't eaten one in a long time...
    Have a wonderful day!!!
     
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  4. Chema Ysmer

    Chema Ysmer Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Sweets, dripping the insect's most precious wish,
    the need to fly
    and hunger above the clouds
    he always dresses in white.

    Beautiful Haiku.
    Thank you Guadalupe and sweet kisses
    under the fig tree.
     
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  5. dragon_ecu

    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    English is not my mother tongue... but... I try and try.. and fail regularity.

    Red leaves of autumn
    deliver their locations
    to new leaves sprouting

    Kiss and hug.


    (Thanks to google translate) :rolleyes:
     
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  6. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    I am happy that you enjoyed this Haiku, I love figs, but we do not get to enjoy them very much in Texas; however, I remember eating them at my grandmother's house in Mexico when I was young, perhaps that is why I like the so much, because they remind me of her...

    XOXOXOXOX

    (X= Kisses and O= Hugs)
     
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  7. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    I grew up speaking English and it is easier for me to write and speak in this foreign tongue because Spanish should be my native language. What I value the most is that you, my dear Dragon friend tried, not only did you dedicated time but made an effort to go out of your comfort zone to leave a beautiful image in words and I appreciate that very much.

    XOXOXOX
     
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    Berengario Poeta recién llegado

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    Los árboles no florecen los primeros años, así que cuando lo hacen "they spout". Una imagen muy visual.
     
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