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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Sep 20, 2021. Replies: 8 | Views: 474

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Brilla el espejo
    del río cuando el hielo
    detiene el agua.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Sep 20, 2021
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  2. Gustavo Cavicchia

    Gustavo Cavicchia Gus

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    :) maravilloso
     
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    Gustavo Cavicchia, Sep 20, 2021
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Espectacular imagen maestro Maramin. Lo dice todo en pocas palabras, me encanta. Un gran abrazo con mucha admiracion.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Sep 21, 2021
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  4. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Me falta mucho para hacer un Haiku así, con esa bella flexibilidad. Brillante. Una imagen preciosa
    Pero en mi ignorancia lo calificaría de Hokku. Que tenga buenas noches Maestro
     
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    María Baena, Sep 21, 2021
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    [​IMG]
     
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    Maramin, Sep 23, 2021
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    Celebro amiga Laly que te haya complacido este haiku invernal. Grata visita y comentario.

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    Maramin, Sep 23, 2021
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  7. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    La primera impresión fue la buena, amiga María, tiene kigo invernal bien definido.

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    Maramin, Sep 23, 2021
  8. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Una detenida imagen invernal, el hielo como sosten que apresa el agua
    cuando el frio es intenso. bellissimo. saludos amables de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Oct 15, 2021
  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    En efecto, es aí como lo vi y sentí, amigo Carlos, celebro que lo hayas captado.

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