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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Oct 2, 2023. Replies: 7 | Views: 403

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Cálido otoño,
    alfombra de hojarasca
    en el camino.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 2, 2023
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Un precioso y sencillo Haiku. Un placer leerlo, Maramin.
     
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    María Baena, Oct 3, 2023
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  3. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Así es, estimada María, celebro que te haya complacido.

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    Maramin, Oct 3, 2023
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    marlene2m Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Son momentos bellos y nostálgicos.
    Un placer leer.
    Saludo
     
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    marlene2m, Oct 8, 2023
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Gracias, Marlene, celebro que te haya complacido.

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    Maramin, Oct 8, 2023
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Maramin,
    no se nada de Hikus,
    pero como referencia o semejanza al tuyo podría decir o inventar algo.

    Frigorífico invierno
    alfombra de coco
    en la ciudad.

    Somos espejos
    y yo consciente de mí
    en tus ojos de vidrio me reflejo. ​

    La verdad tu Hiku te quedo, además de claro, muy bonito.

    Saludos,

    Fidel Guerra.
     
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    Guerrion, Oct 8, 2023
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  7. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Bueno, Fidel, ya has mostrado bien que de haiku no sabes nada pero de buen humor un montón. Gracias por pasar y sustraerme una sonrisita.

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    Maramin, Oct 9, 2023
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Maramin,
    you are correct, I do not know much about Hikus,
    but I made an effort. However, I am pleased to have been able to bring a smile to your face.

    Respetuosamente,

    Fidel Guerra.
     
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    Guerrion, Oct 9, 2023
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