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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, May 15, 2021. Replies: 6 | Views: 501

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Amanecer,​
    hilachas blanquecinas
    entre los árboles.​
     
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  2. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Precioso Hokku. Porque lo has escrito tu, sino dudaría entre el Haiku. Pero me encanta. Un abrazo
     
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  3. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Es porque no indica estación, falta de kigo.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Preciosa imagen Maramin, transmite una inmensa paz. Un abrazo.
     
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro, amiga Laly que haya sido de tu agrado.

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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Paz abierta en esa angostura tan amable para que la naturaleza arborea se
    aglutine en un amanecer de rocios..., blancos y a la vez humedos. estampa
    magnifica. saludos de luzyabsenta
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Leve neblina evaporándose entre los árboles es lo que percibí, pero también es válida la interpretación que le das en tu grato comentario.

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