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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Zulma Martínez, May 1, 2024. Replies: 14 | Views: 388

  1. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Luna de invierno
    se pierde mientras baila
    entre los pinos
     
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    Zulma Martínez, May 1, 2024
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  2. GALA GROSSO

    GALA GROSSO Poeta adicto al portal

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    Este poema habla de naturaleza, lleva kigo (estación del año) directamente.
    La métrica es de : 5-7-5-, admite algo de lirismo y subjetivismo,
    Aplausos
     
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  3. Alde

    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Muy bonito.

    Saludos
     
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    Alde, May 1, 2024
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    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Muchas gracias por leerme y por tu comentario incentivador! Saludos...
     
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    Zulma Martínez, May 1, 2024
  5. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Muy agradecida por tus comentarios, Alde! Saludos...
     
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    la música que envuelve
    su crepuscular paso

     
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  7. Zulma Martínez

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    Muy cierto! Una bella melodía para el mágico danzar del nocturno astro... Muchas gracias, Dragon! Saludos...
     
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    Iguazú Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Hermosa imagen.

    Feliz finde.
     
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    Iguazú, May 2, 2024
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  9. Zulma Martínez

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    Muchas gracias por leerme y comentar, Iguazú! Felicidades a ti también...
     
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    Zulma Martínez, May 2, 2024
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Precioso Zulma. Me ha encantado
     
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    Flor de Lys Poeta adicto al portal

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    Precioso
    Saludos
     
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    José Valverde Yuste Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Muy bonita imagen Zulma. Un abrazo con la pluma del alma
     
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    José Valverde Yuste, May 20, 2024
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    Muchas gracias por leerme y comentar, Flor! Saludos...
     
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    Muchas gracias, José! Abrazo...
     
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    Me alegra tu comentario alentador, María! Saludos...
     
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