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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by JSJT, Feb 20, 2015. Replies: 2 | Views: 540

  1. JSJT

    JSJT Poeta recién llegado

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    Interminables
    parecen del puercoespín
    sus flacos sables.
     
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    JSJT, Feb 20, 2015
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  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    La metáforas impiden que se considere un haiku.

    .........[​IMG]
     
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    Maramin, Feb 25, 2015
  3. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Una bella obra que deja espacios unicos para
    unirse a esa realidad natural. interminables
    las formas de esas punzadas. excelente.
    saludos de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Jul 28, 2017

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