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Invernal

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Sep 19, 2021. Replies: 10 | Views: 465

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Noche invernal,
    aun más blanca la nieve
    bajo el farol.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Sep 19, 2021
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  2. Antonio Cuello

    Antonio Cuello Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Todo es reflejo de su naturaleza...
    Saludos, Maramín
     
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  3. Luis Prieto

    Luis Prieto Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global

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    Hermosa estampa invernal que como no puede ser de otra manera dejas en el arte del Haiku.
    Maestría donde las haya, mis felicitaciones Marcos por esta belleza.
    Fraternal abrazo.
     
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  4. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    En efecto, es lo natural. Saludos y buena semana.

    [​IMG]
     
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    Maramin, Sep 20, 2021
  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro, amigo Luis que te haya agradado la visión que presento en este haiku. Abrazote.

    ......................... [​IMG]
     
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    Maramin, Sep 20, 2021
  6. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Un delicioso Haiku que invita a meterse en el invierno. Que tengas buen dia
     
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    María Baena, Sep 20, 2021
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  7. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Gracias, amiga María, celebro que te haya parecido aceptable. Buena semana...

    [​IMG]
     
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  8. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Me parece muy bueno
     
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    María Baena, Sep 20, 2021
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  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Si pero lleva doble kigo, ahora lo percibo.
     
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    Maramin, Sep 20, 2021
  10. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Imagen invernal donde la nieve es reflejo especial cuando se funde naturalmente
    sobre la luz artifical. concrecion y reverberancia de sentimientos en una
    bella cadencia hilada. disfrute al maximo. saludos con afecto de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Sep 21, 2021
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  11. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro, amigo Carlos, que le hayas encontrado fundamento a este breve haiku invernal. Agradezco tu grato comentario.

    [​IMG] ​
     
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