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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by sunny, Dec 3, 2007. Replies: 2 | Views: 938

  1. sunny

    sunny Poeta recién llegado

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    If you wanna go
    You may leave
    The door is open
    And the path is clear

    If you wanna go
    Wait no more
    Just pack your stuff
    And follow the sun

    If you wanna go
    Do it today
    But remember
    I am asking you to stay…

    But if you wanna go
    I’ll say no more
    I’ll give you a kiss
    I’ll give you a hug
    And I’ll close the door…

    So please, just go and hurt me no more
     
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    sunny, Dec 3, 2007
  2. Esme

    Esme Poeta adicto al portal

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    Understandable is the pain of letting go, when the love is true.... it kills the heart to see how the one you love will never be...

    It was of great pleasure reading your poem... sincere kisses and hugs for you.
    :)
     
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    Esme, Dec 3, 2007
  3. Olor a lluvia

    Olor a lluvia Poeta asiduo al portal

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    "If you wanna go... do it today"
    Just the necessary words... How much can it hurts??? Just let it go... I like it very much brujita
     
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    Olor a lluvia, Dec 4, 2007

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