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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 7, 2008. Replies: 22 | Views: 2364

  1. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Kiss me under the rain,
    for I just can't refrain
    my thirst for your kisses,
    and your love that pleases
    my spirit in pain...

    Kiss me under the moon,
    for It'll never be soon
    nor late for us lovers,
    to hide from the others
    in our world of loon...

    Kiss me under the sky,
    for we'll never know why
    God won't grant the wishes,
    of our souls the pieces
    in eternal cry...
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 7, 2008
  2. Pedro Ferreira

    Pedro Ferreira Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Mi nivel de inglés no me permite sacar todo el jugo que de seguro tiene, Ricardo.

    Un abrazo desde mi mar.
     
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    Pedro Ferreira, Jul 7, 2008
  3. elpoetaz

    elpoetaz Poeta fiel al portal

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    Is a good poem, you make that the words could touch the heart of the reader. My five stars goes with you.
     
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    elpoetaz, Jul 7, 2008
  4. Tsadkiel

    Tsadkiel Poeta veterano en el portal

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    It's a beautiful poem, great job!!

    Saludos..!!!
     
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    Tsadkiel, Jul 7, 2008
  5. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    muchas gracias mi amigo...
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 7, 2008
  6. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank u vry much my brother...RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 7, 2008
  7. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    muchos gracies mi jermanitou...hahahahahhh!!1 RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 7, 2008
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    That is a song to a loving heart , I really like the way You write here is a perfec example of Your talent , is good to be here , my best whishes my dear friend se you at the ink , Jess
     
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    jesse salas, Jul 7, 2008
  9. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thanks Jess for your time and your beautiful words...it is an honor as well as a great pleasure to have you here...take care dude...RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 7, 2008
  10. Aonika

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    Tu poema es tan hermoso tan sncero tan lindo tan tan tan jejejej Se ha convertido en mi favorito.
     
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    Aonika, Jul 15, 2008
  11. zahir

    zahir Poeta reconocida en el portal

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    Kiss me, under everything.. :)

    i really like this writing, cuz i know that you wrote it with a lot of love, and passion, as you do in spanish..

    really nice poem.. i like it!

    see you soon!
    bye :)
     
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    zahir, Jul 15, 2008
  12. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    merci mon amie...RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 15, 2008
  13. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thanx my love...its always a pleasure to here from you! God bless!!! RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 15, 2008
  14. tristany

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    Beautiful poem.
    Bueno te lo digo en español, me ha parecido precioso.
    Un placer leerte en ingles tambien
    Un afectuoso abrazo
    Joan
     
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    tristany, Jul 30, 2008
  15. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank youvery much!!!
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jul 30, 2008
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    Ryahsseto Poeta recién llegado

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    I likes it very much ^^
     
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    Ryahsseto, Aug 5, 2008
  17. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    glad to hear you liked my poem so much...thanks for coming! RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Aug 5, 2008
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    Congratulations!!!!! It's wonderful, really. Well done ricardo!

    see u
     
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    E.R., Aug 6, 2008
  19. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank u very much for visiting and leaving your comments...RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Aug 6, 2008
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    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Sweet thoughts, nice rhyme, a pleasure reading, cheers!
     
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    poroeta, Sep 3, 2008
  21. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank you verymuch for your words...RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Sep 3, 2008
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    Its a magic invitation to live and love. Congratulations Ricardo for this beautiful poem. See ya.
     
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    fallen_raven, Sep 15, 2008
  23. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thanx dude for your beautiful words! RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Sep 15, 2008

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