Lonely Sky

From my lonely sky,
i see my self lying in the tub,
Bleeding, still breathing,
I stopped believing
So much time ago.

Now I just can watch my self down there
So alone, so incredulous, so tired.

From my lonely sky
I just can’t find you anymore,
Your fragile fingerprints have disappeared,
Please I need you,
I need your body lying here by my side,
Feeling your essence near to me.

From my lonely sky
I ask for some hope,
For some reason to stay here,
Would you give it to me someday?
The end is coming too soon,
I don’t have so much time now.
Was in my hands,
now your god maybe will take care of me…​

 

Spectacular, incredible.
I like it very much, you are a very good poet.
" From my lonely sky,
I ask for some hope,
(...)
Please I need you. "

I cant´t find anyother word.
I love it.
The best whishes to you, Tamara.








Luis.-

 

Solo el titulo es ya una color gris, tu escrito esta lleno de ese dolor que muchos padecemos en algun momento, pero que tambien es necesario vivir intensamente cada sentimiento.

Saludos....

 

thaks you two for writing, kisses bye bye

 

estuve lejos por mucho tiempo, estoy de vuelta, saludos a todos