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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Ricardo R. Ruiz, Dec 13, 2007. Replies: 3 | Views: 878

  1. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    to my forever egyptian queen...


    the empty bottle under the moon glow
    was longing for the touch of a hand:
    mysterious doddes from a foreign land,
    dying like a glass rose in the snow.

    i brought her by my heart and felt her pain,
    and her tears arose the gods above.
    i saw her crying in the name of love...
    longing for Her kisses of fresh rain!

    and her breath was mist of perfumed essence
    as she recalled stories from our past:
    true confessions of a long gone presence.

    sandrilla let her die beyond the sea,
    solitude that will forever last...
    and in the dark she's longing...just like me.
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Dec 13, 2007
  2. E.R.

    E.R. Poeta recién llegado

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    ...AND IN THE DARK I'M LONGING...JUST LIKE U...

    KEEP ON WRITING LIKE THIS

    SEE U
     
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    E.R., Dec 14, 2007
  3. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    Remebering the past...
    How delightful and painful as you have so expressed. Who is this Sandrilla? You have aroused my curiosity. Lovely poem!
     
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    Arana1006, Dec 19, 2007
  4. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank u very much my friend! tu parle il italiano...Io parlo ma solo un po...RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Dec 31, 2007

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