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Lust & Heart

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Jules, Jun 28, 2007. Replies: 2 | Views: 785

  1. Jules

    Jules Poeta recién llegado

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    take me finally to the darkest room
    where no one else will see us but the moon
    through cold corridors melting in lust
    you and I, this will be our burst

    Endless hours of carnal pleasure
    go on baby, this have no measure
    only enjoy one minute at a time
    This is the moment,tomorrow we might die

    say your prays, and come with me
    dark is the night that let us be.
    let me tell you, how much I care
    about hurting you, I'd never dare.

    Don't go away, don't go please
    Since you are someone, that I would miss
    Cuz' I guess I need you
    Cuz' I guess I want you.

    Stay by my side, never let me alone
    don't make me wake up, And realize you're gone
    and if you are going,
    take with you my heart,
    since I won't need it
    It will be torn apart.
     
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  2. Princesa De Hielo

    Princesa De Hielo Poeta recién llegado

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    Demasiado buen poema!!! Aunq me diga exagerada es la verdad jejeje está demasiado bueno y muy bien escrito :)
     
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  3. Just Another Dreamer

    Just Another Dreamer Poeta recién llegado

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    Me gusto mucho!!! It's wonderful...
    Excelente poema, y muy buena redacción.
    My stars 4 U!!!
     
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