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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Ross Ross, Sep 21, 2009. Replies: 4 | Views: 703

  1. Ross Ross

    Ross Ross Poeta fiel al portal

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    The stars of heaven caught the mask


    Two eyes watched clouds of Black


    The colours of summer are now over.


    Conceal my disguise songs of water.




    When you listen to the waves


    When you lay at the sea


    There is the sweetest smile


    There is the longest weep.




    Far it’s, so far, the evening’s feel


    You can see the barrier that watch my dreams.


    There, the mask of everyday


    There, the mask the veils’ rain




    When you listen to the waves


    When you lie at the sea.


    There is the sweetest smile


    There is the longest weep.




    [COLOR=seagreen]Then I wonder about if masks are going to fall[/COLOR]


    [SIZE=3][COLOR=seagreen]Then I wander about if masks are going to fall.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
     
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  2. JOP PIOBB

    JOP PIOBB Exp..

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    Very well your poem
     
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  3. Ross Ross

    Ross Ross Poeta fiel al portal

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    Muchas gracias por comentarme.
    Saludos, compañero
     
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  4. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Beautiful poem.."the longest weep".. captivating phrase.

    -congratulations!
     
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  5. Ross Ross

    Ross Ross Poeta fiel al portal

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    Muchas gracias por comentarme.
    Muy agradecido.
    Saludos.
     
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