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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lordtever, Aug 8, 2008. Replies: 9 | Views: 1230

  1. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    Maybe tonight
    I am on your mind,
    my voice and the beat of my heart.​

    I know you can't see me
    But I'm feeling your breathing
    undeletable in my head.​

    Maybe tonight
    a tear will fall from your eyes
    and I'll know you're honoring our life.​

    I know you're alone
    even though the fullness of the saloon
    you can avoid de void in your soul.​

    Miss me tonight
    because I don't know how many nights
    I'll be lost in the sky,​

    Maybe tonight
    our love will die
    when you open your heart
    to another eyes.​
     
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    lordtever, Aug 8, 2008
  2. LoryCross

    LoryCross Poeta recién llegado

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    Tremendos estos versos. Melancólico todo este poema. Muy agradable depliegue de sentimientos. Un saludo
     
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    LoryCross, Aug 8, 2008
  3. Gustavo Cervantes

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    Nice words..
    Kind of reminded me of a nice song
    titled also Maybe tonight
    from kate of australia...



    peace...
     
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    Gustavo Cervantes, Aug 8, 2008
  4. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    never heard of it, but I will download it
     
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    lordtever, Aug 9, 2008
  5. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    I used to write so many thoughts
     
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    lordtever, Aug 13, 2009
  6. JOP PIOBB

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    MAY BE TONIGHT I STAR YOU

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    JOP PIOBB, Aug 13, 2009
  7. teresa12

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    i likee the last paart very nicee :)
     
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    teresa12, Aug 13, 2009
  8. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    thank you for the kind words
     
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    lordtever, Jan 22, 2011
  9. MercedesBarcessat

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    Maybe tonight you will meet
    maybe tonight you will make it right
    who knows what can happen
    everything goes.
    Stay alert !!!!!
    I like your poem, flowing nicely. thank you
    I leave the song for my australian compatriote Kate DeAraugo who has a beautiful, lively voice. Hope you enjoyed.
    hugs

    merche
    [video=youtube;E7mz01TeNeE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E7mz01TeNeE[/video]
     
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    MercedesBarcessat, Feb 11, 2011
  10. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    Thank you... beautiful
     
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    lordtever, Feb 12, 2011

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