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Discussion in 'Poemas Generales' started by daniela600, Jul 29, 2007. Replies: 5 | Views: 734

  1. daniela600

    daniela600 Poeta recién llegado

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    I'm latina,
    I'm hispana,
    a pure mexican, indigenuos,
    an adolescent with adult's brain.

    I'm a lazy girl,
    that's what I think,
    but when i got up,
    I'm a humminbird,
    flying and giving love in everywhere.

    I'm a hater of hate,
    war, poverty and pain.
    A lover of justice, of nature.
    A dreamer of peace, of love.

    I'm your guard if I see you in trouble.
    I'm your support if I see you failing.
    I'm with you if you need me,
    but I'm your friend if you deserve it.

    I'm nice, sometimes rude,
    I'm kind and distrustful too,
    a cry baby as you see,
    a simple person, who worth a lot,
    because I know who I am,
    and how I am.:)
     
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  2. Felipe Antonio Santorelli

    Felipe Antonio Santorelli Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    You are just the way you are suppose to be.
    God does not make mistakes
    and you, my baby lady
    are the best of his creations.
    Very good; your english poem it is a show of your talent.
    kisses of chocolate
    for you
    from me.
     
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  3. edelabarra

    edelabarra Mod. Enseñante. Mod. foro: Una imagen, un poema

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    Dear Daniela600:
    I can't but agree with our friend Felipe Antonio.
    I know you are perfect,
    as a God creature,
    and this is our challenge,
    trying to be heard,
    and try to hear from the others.
    I only needed to read your words, to see deep inside you,
    and be aware of your kindness and quality.
    I send you my best wishes
    and embrace you.
    edelabarra
     
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  4. daniela600

    daniela600 Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanks to both of you.
    Realmente agradesco sus comentarios,
    y pues si, eso es lo k soy.

    KISSES AND HUGS.
    YOUR FRIEND DANY.:::hug:::
     
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  5. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    Very nice poem.
    the most important is that you know who you are, and how.
    I think this poem might be in "la torre de babel", where everyone write in English, French, etc.
    I send you my best wishes!
    Kisses!
    Good luck

    -Solcito.-
     
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  6. Felipe Antonio Santorelli

    Felipe Antonio Santorelli Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Receive also my stars.
     
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