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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 1, 2017. Replies: 12 | Views: 1237

  1. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Un mirlo vuela
    yo quisiera que cante
    él ya no espera.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 1, 2017
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    Cheros Acracia-Utopía

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    Qué bien suena !
    ...y él ya te espera ...
     
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    Cheros, Jan 9, 2017
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Tú lo escuchaste?
    Yo no le hice caso
    Dile que vuelva...

    Gracias por tus palabras,
    Salud.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Asustadizo,
    el mirlo entre las hierbas
    corre a esconderse.

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    Maramin, Jan 9, 2017
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  5. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Manto de hierba
    Efímera belleza
    Un mirlo vuela.

    Saludos Maramin.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 9, 2017
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Belleza para un vuelo que es esperanza
    y salutacion de libertad no trastocada.
    felicidades. magnifico. luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Jan 26, 2017
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    Se formaría un interesante renga...

    Mientras callado veo
    sus alas alejarse

    Su canto se aleja
    no creo que me oiga

    Otro pequeño queda
    oculto a la vista

    Mientras desde las hierbas
    él con sus píos llama.

    Quiso el mirlo
    que el resto en tierra
    siga su vuelo.

    Abran ya pues sus alas
    el viento les reclama.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias , maestro .
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 29, 2017
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Un placer que pases por mis letras,
    Gracias compañero.
     
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Gracias , maestro .

    Agradezco tu respuesta y en sobremanera tus
    modos poeticos de gran belleza. saludos siempre
    de luzyabsenta
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Feb 4, 2020
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Que maravilla, leer a tantos magníficos poetas! .Un placer de los grandes
    Precioso Ruben
     
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    María Baena, Feb 5, 2020
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    Gracias María.
     
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