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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by K-rolissa, Apr 7, 2010. Replies: 4 | Views: 1364

  1. K-rolissa

    K-rolissa Poeta reconocido en el portal

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    If anybody could ask now,

    nobody would able to explain the reason

    that dragged him into nothingness

    and the abyss.



    I think of all the murderers dead

    I think of a man lying

    with his violin, silent at last

    I think of an insect

    reduced to nothing under a shoe.



    Something in the cold wind

    searches through the streets

    like a wild beast

    looking for the quiet end

    of our bones,

    at this time all that's really needed

    is just the midday's sleepiness

    but the sun would not appear

    anywhere.



    Soon the storm will force the moon

    to also search refuge in the nothingness

    and the abyss ...



    Suddenly today I remember

    that man, that surely yesterday

    was upset somewhere unimportant,

    cursing as he looked across the night

    and a horrible love song

    escaped from his mouth.


     
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  2. fragilprincesa

    fragilprincesa Poeta asiduo al portal

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    So beautiful, I just don’t have words to describe it
    Hug and kisses
     
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    K-rolissa Poeta reconocido en el portal

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    Thanks Princess, it's good to know you have enjoyed the reading, and that something could be save out of the terrible sadness is left when everyone is gone. XoXo
     
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    César Guevar Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    It's a very beautiful poem, young woman.

    When the moon has to look for refuge out of herself and her nature
    there is not a song able to allay the pain.
    So, sadness takes place and opens a great hole in our souls.

    Congratulations for writting and thanks for sharing these wonderful lines with us.
    My applausse for you.
     
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  5. danie

    danie solo un pensamiento...

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    Returning to the Old English language.
    Emotional poem that keeps the suspense until the last. It is to highlight the end of the play, terrible love that song that escapes his mouth.

    It was a pleasure to read you.

    A hug.
     
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