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My Loneliness

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Karla M. Montes, Aug 6, 2007. Replies: 1 | Views: 708

  1. Karla M. Montes

    Karla M. Montes Poeta recién llegado

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    I'm so tired of this loneliness
    is breaking in pieces my heart
    why is it that for me there's no happiness?
    where do i find it? where do i start?

    I don't want to be lonely
    i don't want to be sad
    i don't want to wonder "if only..."
    or "what with you i might've had"

    In my life i need you back
    and once again be able to smile
    because of laughter there's a lack
    you've been gone for a while.

    Please come and dry my tears
    and make my life a bliss
    if you're here i'll have no fears
    you'd take 'em away with a simple kiss.
     
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  2. Salvador Pliego

    Salvador Pliego Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Logras mucho ritmo en estos versos. A pesar de su tristeza dejan un sabor muy agradable. Saludos.
     
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