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My soul

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Arkman, Jan 29, 2008. Replies: 4 | Views: 940

  1. Arkman

    Arkman Poeta recién llegado

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    My soul...is broken...
    all do I need...
    is a little piece of the sky
    a flame of the new dawn
    an ice crystal of a deep sea
    an old black cloud
    a tear of a shy girl
    if I get it all...
    I will give it to you...
    so you can finally
    kiss me...
    because that could be as hard
    than get all that treasures...
    even more...

    Dedicated to:

    All every one in love
    Don´t give up.

    See you.

    Arkman.
     
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    Arkman, Jan 29, 2008
  2. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    To give up is to allow your soul to be broken.
    A very nice poem Arkman.
    Welcome to Mundopoesia!
     
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    Arana1006, Jan 29, 2008
  3. Gustavo Cervantes

    Gustavo Cervantes Invitado

    .. jeje...

    ..so cute...

    peace kid...
     
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    Gustavo Cervantes, Jan 29, 2008
  4. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    Don´t give up...
    It´s nice...
     
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    Sol Mircovich, Jan 29, 2008
  5. Arkman

    Arkman Poeta recién llegado

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    Yo pecador and Sol Mircovich thanks for your comments
    Anche grazie a te Arana1006

    later! ^^
     
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    Arkman, Jan 30, 2008

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