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Discussion in 'Poemas Melancólicos (Tristes)' started by Emp, Mar 18, 2021. Replies: 15 | Views: 882

  1. Emp

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    A E.

    Dame un soplo
    algo
    no se, un sueño fugaz
    quiero desviar
    no ver ya oscuros pasillos a ti
    dame señales rotas
    desvíos
    y esas ropas tuyas
    sueltas amén de la marea?
    y esos paseos de miel y chimeneas?
    No acribilles
    no escapes hacia la nada
    te quiero
    te quiero.

    Enzo.
     
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  2. GEORTRIZIA

    GEORTRIZIA ♥Niña de los besos rosas♥

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    Me amas... :oops:
     
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  3. marquelo

    marquelo Negrito villero

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    felicitaciones Enzo.
    Saludos cordiales.
     
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    Gracias Mifren por leer y comentar mi humilde obra. ;)
     
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    Emp, Mar 18, 2021
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    Gracias Hmno!
     
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    Maria Jose Palacios Poeta fiel al portal

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    No te alejes, no me dejes de recordar, te quierop es una frase muy hermosa pero te amo es aun mas poderosa. bonito poema.
     
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    Gracias, Maria José.
     
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    Emp, Mar 20, 2021
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    Hiba Poeta recién llegado

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    Belleza, si, belleza...
     
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    Hiba, Mar 22, 2021
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  9. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    Uxtedex ia xegaron al siguiente nivel, en serio los dox, me happy :):):):):):):):)
     
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    DESIRE SOLE, Mar 22, 2021
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  10. Anamer

    Anamer Poeta veterano en el portal Equipo Revista "Eco y latido"

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    Una dulce petición que espero de corazón sea atendida Enzo,
    me gusta tu poema, breve y conciso, gracias por compartirlo
    en el foro. Besitos por miles en tus mejillas.
     
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    :)
     
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    o_O :)
     
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    Gracias! :)
     
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    Emp, Apr 3, 2021
  14. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    :oops: yo no tengo la culpa
     
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  15. Pedro Olvera

    Pedro Olvera #ElPincheLirismo

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    "Dame una pinche señal, nena" dice una canción bubble gum de los 60´s:

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    Muy bueno todo, amigo Enzo. Saludos.
     
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    Genial ese tema, top de top. ;)
     
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