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Nostalgia

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by sunny, Jan 18, 2008. Replies: 4 | Views: 1035

  1. sunny

    sunny Poeta recién llegado

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    I just wonder
    Where are you now?
    What are you doing?
    Do you miss me now?

    I just wonder
    Whether you are happy
    Whether you are sad
    Whether you are still in love
    Or whether she just broke your heart…

    I just wonder
    What’s going on with you?
    What are your plans?
    What are your dreams?
    What do you want to be?

    I just wonder
    Whether your smile
    Is just as bright as I remember
    Whether your eyes
    Are as shy and sweet as they used to be
    Whether you’ll ever leave my heart…

    But, as I said, I just wonder
    Cause’ whether we are here
    In the same town
    In the same street
    In the same block
    You are just away
    And I understand
    It is meant to be that way…

    But still, I wonder
    Cause once in a while I really do miss you
    I miss you so bad it makes me cry…
     
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  2. ScoutAngel

    ScoutAngel Poeta recién llegado

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    Brraaavoooooo!!!!

    I LOVE IT!

    That poem hav a great ending my dear friend.

    I hope you the best!

    Good luck
     
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  3. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    We never stop wondering, even when the love and pain fade away.
    You expressed that so nicely.
    You have a knack for sad verses. Keep it up!
     
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  4. .. jeje...

    Nostalgie...like a beautiful female or like a melancholic feeling..
    nice poem dude...

    peace..
     
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  5. Olor a lluvia

    Olor a lluvia Poeta asiduo al portal

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    I just wonder.... Whether you’ll ever leave my heart…
    Qué inspirado Sunny sinceramente, me tocó el corazón con aquella ausencia que no me deja dormir. Progresas cada vez más. Este poema está genial, con mucho sentimiento. Un abrazo fuerte y salud por quien sabemos....
     
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