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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Inferno du Doleur, Aug 14, 2009. Replies: 12 | Views: 1145

  1. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    As stars have fallen,
    the moon loses its bright.
    As my dreams fade away,
    oh, they fade away.

    Look at those fallen stars
    The night won't never be the same.
    Where is the love I used to feel for her?
    It slowly fades away.

    I tried to catch her dreams
    but the demons won't set her free
    I tried not to bury her soul alive
    ...my mistake...

    I tried to make her understand,
    life is not the same as it was before.
    [COLOR=#9932cc]She woke up from her dream[/COLOR]
    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]And from now on she'll live alone,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]Oh, she will always be alone[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]All alone.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]I tried not to break her spirit into peaces[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]I tried to evade those dead dreams,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]those dead nights,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]those old memories.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]Even if I tried hard,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]my words might never been spoken[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]My heart, frozen.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]My voice won't sing the saddest song to her.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]I tried not to breathe her name in vain,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]not to break up into tears[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]or even kill myself, all because of her absense[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]Still, my effort means nothing.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]The last melody would be played by my cello,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]The last note would be the broken one.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]My life disappears as her body falls in my arms[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]With my sweet embrace I hide up her nightmares.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]I won't let her die in her dreams,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]I won't let her kill herself in fantasies.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]But without her, it is easier[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]I think at myself as her new toy, just a puppet.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]Even if I drive myself into the end,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]myself into the end.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]Tears won't fall apart from my eyes,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]words won't be pronounced by my lips.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]Even if her love is killing me,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]I'll kill myself first, I want her to suffer.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]What she have done to me does not deserve forgiveness,[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]What she have done to me does not deserve any mercy.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]August 14, 2009, this is when I die because of you.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc]Suffer baby, suffer.[/COLOR][/SIZE]
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    [FONT=Palatino Linotype][SIZE=3][COLOR=#9932cc][IMG]http://lilith4.files.wordpress.com/2009/01/2382486847_9c473520b8.jpg[/IMG][/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]    ​
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    Inferno du Doleur, Aug 14, 2009
  2. Esme

    Esme Poeta adicto al portal

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    Your beautiful writing holds love, pain and tears of sorrow. Hope your
    heart can find the cure it needs. kiss.

    Esme
     
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    Esme, Aug 14, 2009
  3. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    Elisalle, mil gracias por pasar! Espero que sigas en mis poemas, asi como lo hago yo con los tuyos.
    Esme, thanks you for your comment! Kisses for you
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Aug 14, 2009
  4. lore1

    lore1 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    No entiendo mucho el inglés pero he seguido con atención tu poema y lo quehe comprendido me ha parecido hermoso, muy hermoso y la imagen muy linda también. Un placer pasar, besos y estrellas para tu poema.[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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    lore1, Aug 14, 2009
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    x Invitado

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    Domino el ingles y has escrito un poema precioso para el desengaño. En el amor se sufre, es la forma de aprender a querer de nuevo....con mas sabiduria y menos egoismo. Really beautiful, but remember that forgiveness helps to forget. Beautiful poem. Saludos. Paloma.[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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  6. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    Thanks to everyone,
    Guadalupe, thanks a lot, it is just because I have to practice more my english, I've been learning since I was 5 years old, and it seems I'm losing it, Ill start practicing more and more.
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Aug 15, 2009
  7. JOP PIOBB

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    O! I think as Little Lupe you speak English better than us, but you need only practice and more practice. I recommend u, use the MSN messenger with english spoken people. And remember always: It's o! and not so Spanish oh! All right. Ok, to the point. Your poem is pretty!! As always in both languages...I STAR U.

    YOUR EVERLASTING FRIEND

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    JOP PIOBB, Aug 15, 2009
  8. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    Thanks Jop! Well, you are right, I have to practice my english with others haha.
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Aug 16, 2009
  9. cinthia k.

    cinthia k. Poeta asiduo al portal

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    congratulations, it is a really nice poem,
    the pain is not good for me but it is a interesting poem
    because you said what you feel.
    Perfect!
    :D
    kisses
     
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    cinthia k., Aug 16, 2009
  10. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    Thank you for your comments
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Aug 21, 2009
  11. Gustavo Cervantes

    Gustavo Cervantes Invitado

    twisted as my unicorn...
    perhaps you find your peace kid.

    peace.
     
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    Gustavo Cervantes, Aug 22, 2009
  12. Megara900

    Megara900 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    La oscuridad atrapa, eclosiona los sentidos, es la antítesis de la vida pero igual de poderosa que ella, me ha encantado tu estilo, veo que dominas la lengua extranjera, muy bueno por vos.

    un placer leerte.

    pd: que bellos ojos verdes :p
     
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    Megara900, Aug 22, 2009
  13. Dian Elis

    Dian Elis Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Wow,even in her love kills me,
    well, ahm, someone dedicated this poem to you?
    or it´s just a concecuence of your imagination?
    maybe you felt it, but, There is a date.
    14th August,
    i think it´s there ´cause.... i dunno, something happened...

    am i right?

    well, if the love can kill, am i already dead?, no, the love does not,
    the love only gives happines and smiles,

    but,

    for the love, loving, is only the half,

    Ispirazione per il non-poeta che scrive per voi
    (inspiration for the non-poet who writte for you)

    Faró qualcosa per non farti scordare, che il mio nome reste nei tuoi pensieri, e se è vero che col tempo el amore
    muore, io faró che il tempo sappia aspettare
    (i´m going to do something to don´t let you forget that my name remains in your thoughts, and if it is true, that with the time the love dies, i know that the time will wait longer than my dead.)

    Diego.
     
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    Dian Elis, Feb 10, 2010

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