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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by silveriddragon, Jul 10, 2019. Replies: 10 | Views: 1323

  1. silveriddragon

    silveriddragon Poeta fiel al portal

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    In the path
    of the light
    guide me my dear
    with love
    with no regret.

    Although
    I have nothing
    you put your faith
    in my hands
    with no fear
    and I take you with me.

    Into the darkness
    or in peace
    stay together
    will be our happiness.

    I love you.

    Bright eyes
    beautiful smile
    tell me something
    and send me to the sky.

    Bring me energy
    remember me all that words
    of magic and poetry
    written in the sands
    of your serene temple.

    When I'm far away
    I tell to the moon
    this prayer that I write for you.

    I will send to the wind
    a message, a song
    and you can know
    I'm here with you.
     
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    silveriddragon, Jul 10, 2019
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  2. Ulpiano

    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    In this poem, appreciated poet and friend silveriddragon, you have created a beautiful prayer
    plethoric of romanticism. The confidence and faith which you have for your beloved, turn your
    verses into an excellent conjunction that is, at the same time, magic and poetry.

    With my congratulations, another big and fraternal hug,


    Ulpiano.
     
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    Ulpiano, Jul 13, 2019
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  3. silveriddragon

    silveriddragon Poeta fiel al portal

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    Thank you so much. :-D I really appreciate your comment.

    I try to do a prayer with some things about sacred and profane. I'm going to look for a new way to express this feeling.

    A fraternal hug.

    Silveriddragon
     
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    silveriddragon, Jul 16, 2019
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  4. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    Lindo poema, la lírica es sublime, saludos, DESIRE
     
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    DESIRE SOLE, Jul 16, 2019
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  5. silveriddragon

    silveriddragon Poeta fiel al portal

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    Gracias por tu siempre grata visita Desire

    Un saludo fraterno :)
     
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    silveriddragon, Jul 23, 2019
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  6. Lourdes C

    Lourdes C POETISA DEL AMOR

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    Bella oración impregnada de sentimiento
    y romanticismo. Grato leerte. Saludos cordiales.
     
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    Lourdes C, Jul 23, 2019
  7. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    A ti, felíz prefinde
     
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    DESIRE SOLE, Jul 23, 2019
  8. Guadalupe D. Lopez

    Guadalupe D. Lopez Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hermosa oración echa poesía que llega con la brisa entonando una canción de amor. Un placer leerle poeta.
     
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    Guadalupe D. Lopez, Aug 10, 2019
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  9. silveriddragon

    silveriddragon Poeta fiel al portal

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    Muchas gracias por la visita y el comentario :)

    Quisiera poder escribir una canción en inglés algún día :p

    Un saludo cordial :)
     
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    silveriddragon, Aug 13, 2019
  10. Guadalupe D. Lopez

    Guadalupe D. Lopez Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    El día menos pensado lo logrará, ya lo verá :)
     
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    Guadalupe D. Lopez, Aug 13, 2019
  11. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    I believe in prayer, to whom ever that may be, I believe faith moves those anyting that stands in the way.
    I have enjoyed your rogatory plead.

    From my worls, "peace"
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa, Oct 22, 2019
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