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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Guerrion, Mar 14, 2021. Replies: 12 | Views: 612

  1. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Wandering love
    so long gone from my poetry
    and touch.

    Pretty you
    dreaming over this world
    if I can figure out how you are
    I’ll write you a poem over the wet sand.

    Without you poetry has become
    my favorite companion but through its silence

    know that I’m talking with you,
    pretty one!


    Fidel Guerra, Oregon, March 14, 2021.​
     
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  2. Maria Jose Palacios

    Maria Jose Palacios Poeta fiel al portal

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    Pretty lines every woman would feel really in love with you, you are amazing writing beautiful poems my friend, Congrats!!!
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    It is a beautiful and melancholic poem Guerrion. Sensitive verses that reach the soul. it was a pleasure to read your work. A big hug.
     
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  4. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    María J,
    I don’t know what to say. I start with walking into the coffee shop this morning, where it all started or at least where I can remember started. Although you know it actually started with someone in mind and not because of the café. Your comment made me smile though “ every woman would feel really in love with you” Well, that only happened to Neruda back then; nowadays we see it happening again with some amazing poets we all know about but can't name out of respect.... anyhow, dear, I thank you for the luxury of your time and warm wishes.

    Kisses from the seventeenth century,
    I haven't experienced them, but these might be cool.

    Fidel Guerra.
     
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  5. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Master friend,
    thanks for your comment
    and pleasure of having you
    around and sharing your time with me.

    I can’t explain how or why some poems
    find me. All I can say is that when I close my eyes
    I go exploring every corner of my limited thoughts and I travel.
    But music on my head phones makes the poetic trip much more romantic to me..always!

    A likeable hug to you,

    Fidel Guerra.
     
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  6. Manuel Bast

    Manuel Bast Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    No manejo el idioma ingles pero gracias a la tecnología pude traducir y leer tu hermosa y enamorada poesía, y en esos términos también puedo responderte, amigo y poeta:
    Congratulations on the muse who inspires your love poems.
    Greetings.
     
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  7. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Gracias Manuel,
    si, la tecnología es increíble, pero dejame decirte, no hace mucho no hablaba, ni entendía ni escribía ingles como humildemente lo hago hoy. Mis primos que si lo hacían me jugaban bromas traduciéndome mal o lo que no decía yo con mi novia gringa y esta me dio varias/muchas chachetadas….no quiero decirte qué le dijeron pero ya te imaginaras. Desde entonces me hice la promesa que iba a aprender y tomé unas clases y en la casa, en Mexico, me la pasaba hablando solo en Ingles cosas simples y luego algunas largas hasta que mis papas tambien aprendieron Ingles, pero solo para decirme; “ shut up cabron” o callate.

    Anyway, gracias por tu amabilidad.

    Fidel Guerra.
     
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  8. gi---golo
     
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  9. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I am not...don't know what you're talking about bro, besides, I am practically monogamous. trust me.! Oh for God's sakes... please reza diez padres...hopefuly this will clear your path toward heaven...

    kindly,
    Fidel Saint Guerra.
     
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  10. jeje... you know they say... just tell me a little bit
    i put in the rest

    congrats on your composition
     
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  11. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thanks man, but this is all about inspiration and nothing else..la neta o the netau en ingles.
    you're funny.!je, je..
     
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  12. Just puling your leg... having a nice cold brew... cheers!

    is always something to celebrate... today is your inspiration.
     
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    You're right Gus,...everybody has such days or different ones that feel like today. Tu sabes, a mi casi no me llega, ni aunque le pongas todos los signs, la poesia,. But that's what makes our time here so interesting while drinking beer and coffee and listening to happy and sad music and walking back and forth, like a crazy, to the restroom and in the process missing or gaining some important thoughts or ideas...then your realize that's getting late and you have to work tomorrow morning but you just can's stop, but all is good.

    take care bro,
    Fidel.
     
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