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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Aonika, Jun 11, 2008. Replies: 6 | Views: 828

  1. Aonika

    Aonika Poeta recién llegado

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    Do you remember the day
    we first met
    you had sunglasses
    and my lips where red.
    You sat beside me
    and the words in my head
    where flying around me
    like bees in the rain.
    We met sitting in the ground
    eating grapes, opening mouths
    laughing about our lives
    wishing our lives to be found.
    But you left
    I could not survive
    everyday
    i had you in my mind.
    So today
    wherever you are
    you will
    remember me
    you will
    remember me.
     
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    Aonika, Jun 11, 2008
  2. edwin te amo jeimmy

    edwin te amo jeimmy Poeta adicto al portal

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    eeeeeeeeeeeeee the problem no speak english i sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
     
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    edwin te amo jeimmy, Jun 11, 2008
  3. RMBV

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    Good Beginning And A Weak Ending, Try To Explain Everything Better. Describe More The Actions, Places & Things. Lets Improve A Little Better. Thnks With Respect: Rmbv
     
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    RMBV, Jun 12, 2008
  4. Aonika

    Aonika Poeta recién llegado

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    Thank you very much RMBV, you know what? I was thinking the same thing so I will be more careful in the next poem, thanks, bye.
     
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    Aonika, Jun 12, 2008
  5. Gerardito

    Gerardito Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Beautiful poem, my friend, a hug and stars, i hope read you soon :)
     
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    Gerardito, Jun 12, 2008
  6. Aonika

    Aonika Poeta recién llegado

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    Thank you very much Lu, im glad you like it, wish you a wonderful day!
     
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    Aonika, Jun 13, 2008
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    Aonika Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanks Gerardito,a hug and stars for you too...
     
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    Aonika, Jun 14, 2008

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