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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Ricardo R. Ruiz, Dec 11, 2007. Replies: 8 | Views: 1464

  1. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    crying in the fauces of the darkest night,
    for my egyptian queen tears of shrine and blood.
    in the time the river blesses with his flood,
    there's nothing but nightmare for this ancient knight!

    she flew to a kingdom in time far away,
    to help her monarch to escape from the mazes.
    our sun became moon: duality of faces...
    for this anguished soul there wont be a new day.

    shed the salt of pain and burn me to the ash,
    you almighty gods of the corageous nile!
    kill within my spirit her eternal smile,
    and let my flesh to perish under your slash!

    oh, let me fly away to a distant star,
    with her oblivion as my forever mate.
    reminiscing her every second my fate...
    my queen sandrilla, so close and still so far!
     
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  2. Ana714pr

    Ana714pr Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Este me parece hasta surrealista!!
    no se por que amigo, me fui en un tremendo viaje.... jeje jeje
     
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  3. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    Ricardo, Talk about an epic poem! You could base a whole movie on your loaded verses that have such a good rhythm. Really enjoyed.
     
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  4. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank u very much honey...I did'nt know that you liked poetry in English! RRR
     
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  5. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    thank you very much for your comments on this more than sad poem,which hides a long ans sad story of love and treason...RRR
     
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  6. elizuriel

    elizuriel Invitado

    Siempre me ha encantado tu forma de escribir...
    Hasta aqui eres fabuloso...
    You are a GREAT poet...
    Thanks for everything brother...
    Bendiciones y todo lo mejor para ti... D.T.B.
     
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  7. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    bendito sea Dioa por tu sincera amistad mi buen amigo! RRR
     
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  8. SANDRINA

    SANDRINA Poeta recién llegado

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    oh, let me fly away to a distant star,
    with her oblivion as my forever mate.
    reminiscing her every second my fate...
    my queen sandrilla, so close and still so far!​




    Your letters enjoy unlimited beauty, regards and congratulations.
     
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  9. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you very much my beautiful lady! RRR
     
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