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Sapphire hues

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lluviadeabril, Jul 5, 2011. Replies: 2 | Views: 723

  1. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    On a sapphire morning
    hues of quiet and calm
    I look to you darling, losing
    ground in the shade
    of your arms embrace.​

    Life feels warm to the touch
    as dunes of sand beneath me
    on a summer's day
    just a step
    and I am grace in your eyes
    I find my way.    ​
     
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    lluviadeabril, Jul 5, 2011
  2. cesarfco.cd

    cesarfco.cd Corrector Corrector/a

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    In the exchange of glances
    after a small flicker
    before your subtle flirtation
    lost my balance.

    I find it very difficult to try to answer as a verse in English.

    Anyway, your lyrics are great.

    A hug.
     
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    cesarfco.cd, Jul 5, 2011
  3. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    That writing is difficult for someone of your talent is simply unbelievable –especially given such a beautiful response.

    Thank you so much

    -A hug.
     
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    lluviadeabril, Jul 5, 2011

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