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Senryû

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Jun 15, 2013. Replies: 20 | Views: 1675

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Pon un clavel
    en tu pelo y sonríe,
    ya es primavera.
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    Maramin, Jun 15, 2013
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  2. danie

    danie solo un pensamiento...

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    [FONT=&quot]Un grato y bello senryu, siempre una sonrisa nos trae alegría mutua
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    [FONT=&quot]Saludos
     
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    danie, Jun 15, 2013
  3. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Maramin, Jun 16, 2013
  4. nube blanca

    nube blanca Poeta que no puede vivir sin el portal

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    Un bonito senryu nos dejas querido amigo Maramin,
    con ese aroma de primavera bien plantado.
    Besos y un abrazo. Tere


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    nube blanca, Jun 16, 2013
  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro que haya sido de tu agrado...:::hug:::


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    Maramin, Jun 16, 2013
  6. Lourdes C

    Lourdes C POETISA DEL AMOR

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    Un hermoso clavel
    que muestre que es feliz
    porque el tiempo de primavera
    es para eso, para ser feliz.
    Gracias por compartir. Saludos.
     
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    Lourdes C, Jun 16, 2013
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    Un clavel rojo
    que invita a los danzones
    del nuevo encuentro.
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    cesarfco.cd, Jun 16, 2013
  8. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    La primavera
    es tiempo de esclosión
    de amor en flor.

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    Maramin, Jun 16, 2013
  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Enclavado en el pecho
    enciende corazones.

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    Maramin, Jun 16, 2013
  10. Azalea

    Azalea Invitado

    Bonito
     
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    Azalea, Aug 23, 2019
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  11. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Aromas abiertos a esa primavera donde la sonrisa de los aromas se recogen
    como en notas prendidas de sensibilidad. excelente. luzyabsenta
     
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  12. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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  13. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Siempre amplias miras para dejar un amable y grato comentario, celebro que haya sido de tu agrado.

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    angelcesar Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Un gusto leer. Gracias.
    Saludos.
     
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    angelcesar, Aug 31, 2019
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  15. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Gracias por la respuesta, poner un detalle es lo minimo que se puede ofrecer a tu obra
    poetica, mis saludos siempre. luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Sep 1, 2019
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    Imagino hermosas flamencas en sus vestidos de lunares y un clavel rojo en sus cabellos.
     
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  17. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Yendo a la feria de abril en Sevilla, naturalmente.

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  19. bristy

    bristy Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Un hermosísimo senryú estimado maestro Maramín..grato recorrer estas letras...un abrazo
     
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    bristy, Sep 4, 2019
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    Celebro, amiga Bristy, que este senryû hata sido de tu agrady me obsequies con grato comentario dejando huella de tu visita.

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    marlene2m Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Muy hermoso senryu
    Me encanta!
    Saludo.
     
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    marlene2m, Sep 16, 2019

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