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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Saïd Moreno, Oct 6, 2018. Replies: 4 | Views: 435

  1. Saïd Moreno

    Saïd Moreno Poeta recién llegado

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    Quiero ser lluvia
    y humedecer tus labios
    contra los míos.
     
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    Saïd Moreno, Oct 6, 2018
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    Es un bello senryu.
     
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    dragon_ecu, Oct 6, 2018
  3. Saïd Moreno

    Saïd Moreno Poeta recién llegado

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    Gracias
     
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    Saïd Moreno, Oct 6, 2018
  4. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Bella cadencias en esa torsion humeda donde te
    sumerges. excelente. saludos de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Oct 24, 2018
  5. Alecctriplem

    Alecctriplem Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Simplemente bello, me encanto, saludos.
     
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    Alecctriplem, Nov 5, 2018

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