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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Nov 26, 2019. Replies: 17 | Views: 979

  1. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Te vi marchar
    y te llevaste el sol
    luz de mi vida.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Nov 26, 2019
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    Alizée ⊙ Humαlıen ⊙ ༻✦༺ ♡ WɩꙆt Aᖾωᥲ ♡ ∞ ֎

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    Apreciado Poeta y Amigo, @Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano :
    Dulce y profundamente triste, bellamente triste. Muchas Gracias por compartir. Me gustó demasiado. Reciba mi saludo cordial y mis mejores deseos     ☘
     
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    Alizée, Nov 26, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias Grace por tu compañía.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Nov 27, 2019
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    bristy Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Me encantó leer este bello Senryú….saludos cordiales
     
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    bristy, Nov 28, 2019
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  5. Azalea

    Azalea Invitado

    Precioso Senryu, súbelo a concurso, está muy lindo. Saludos.
     
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    Azalea, Nov 28, 2019
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    MARIANNE MARIAN GONZALES - CORAZÓN DE LOBA

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    Dice la canción
    Que el sol siempre regresa


    Un beso
     
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    MARIANNE, Nov 28, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias como siempre por tus cariñosos comentarios.
    Un abrazo, brysty
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Así lo haré, gracias por tus consejos,
    un abrazo Azalea.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias por tu compañía Marianne
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Nov 30, 2019
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Hermoso senryu Ruben, fue un deleite leer tus líneas. Que tengas un precioso fin de semana.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Nov 30, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias:)
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jan 6, 2020
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Precioso Senryu Rubén, me ha encantado. Un abrazo
     
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    María Baena, Jan 13, 2020
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    Mary Mura Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Estimado compañero Ruben Alonso esta vez no me equivoque me agradó mucho tu trabajo
     
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    Mary Mura, Jan 13, 2020
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    Gracias
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Apr 10, 2020
  15. Azalea

    Azalea Invitado

    Arriba de nuevo. Saludos.
     
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    Azalea, Apr 29, 2020
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias Azalea.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jun 14, 2020
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    Gracias María.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Jul 9, 2020
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Simbologia triste cuando la luz del amor desaparace. me ha gustado mucho.
    saludos amables de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Sep 30, 2022

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