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Senryû

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Mar 16, 2021. Replies: 6 | Views: 370

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Cuando me miras
    encuentro sol y luna
    en tu mirada.
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    Maramin, Mar 16, 2021
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  2. Antonio Cuello

    Antonio Cuello Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    La cortedad de un todo...
    Saludos, poeta
     
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    Antonio Cuello, Mar 17, 2021
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  3. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Precioso Senryu. Un abrazo M Maramin
     
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    María Baena, Mar 17, 2021
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Existencialidad en ese reflejo que busca la luz entre una oracion hacia la
    mirada que siempre entrega cadencias. excelente. saludos afectuosos
    de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Mar 19, 2021
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Como debe ser un senryû, amigo Antonio.

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    Maramin, Mar 20, 2021
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro que haya sido de tu agrado, estimada María.

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    Maramin, Mar 20, 2021
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    Una interpretación muy particular me dejas en este sencillo y directo Senryû.

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