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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by MASTER LY 22, Jun 14, 2021. Replies: 10 | Views: 315

  1. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Sonido bello
    en mis noches de insomnio,
    tu respirar.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 14, 2021
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    Starsev Ionich Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Que hermoso poema, felicitaciones...
     
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    Starsev Ionich, Jun 14, 2021
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchisimas gracias Starsev por tu visita y tu lindo comentario. Me alegra que te guste. Saludos.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 15, 2021
  4. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Excelente senryû.

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    Maramin, Jun 15, 2021
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias Maramin por este reconocimiento, me alegra muchisimo. Un abrazo.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 15, 2021
  6. angelcesar

    angelcesar Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Precioso!!!!
    Abrazo fraternal.
     
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    angelcesar, Jun 19, 2021
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias Angel por la visita, me alegra que te guste. Otro abrazo para vos y buen fin de semana.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 19, 2021
  8. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Excelente acomodacion de sentiientos donde el sonido del respirar se
    necesita para alcanzar la belleza del moemnto. me gusto mucho,
    saludos con afecto de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Jun 21, 2021
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias maestro Luzyabsenta por tu bonito comentario. Me alegra enormemente que te agrade mi escrito. Un gran abrazo.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 21, 2021
  10. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Mea encantado tu bello Senryu laly. Un gran abrazo
     
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    María Baena, Jun 22, 2021
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muchas gracias ,me alegra que te guste maria. Un gran abrazo.
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Jun 22, 2021

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