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    Besos del viento
    acarician su rostro
    y lo enaltece
     
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    Un acompañamiento para la imagen que en el último verso no cuadra.

    Que tal si:

    Besos del viento
    acarician su rostro,
    soplos de ella.

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    Maramin, Aug 1, 2021
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