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Senryû

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Sep 25, 2021. Replies: 8 | Views: 579

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Bajo la piel
    la sangre enardecida
    si pienso en ti.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Sep 25, 2021
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    bristy Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Bonito Senryu, sensual e íntimo. Placer estar en su espacio maestro, saludos cordiales
     
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    bristy, Sep 26, 2021
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Un precioso Senryu ( como diría Dragón, Kitò) Me encantan esos Senryùcon la sensualidad a flor piel
     
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    María Baena, Sep 26, 2021
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Intimidad de esa sangre que se vierte en un recorrido de amor
    inculcado y vivido. mezcla maxima de emocion. me gusto.
    saludos de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Sep 30, 2021
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro, amiga Bristy, que te haya complacido este senryû. Buen fin de semana.

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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Gracias, María, un placer recibir tan grato comentario de tu parte. Saludos.

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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro, amigo Carlos, que te haya gustado tanto este sencillo senryû, intimista.Siempre grato tu comentario-

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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Un senryu de gran sensualidad sin perder la elegancia. Es precioso Maramin. Un gran abrazo.
     
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    Celebro, amiga Laly que te haya complacido esta presentación en formato de senryû.

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