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Senseless

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by denisse, Nov 23, 2014. Replies: 3 | Views: 544

  1. denisse

    denisse Poeta recién llegado

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    Senseless, that's how life feels
    Everyday just goes by me
    but seems like if it's nothing
    is there something wrong happening?

    I can't even try to explain it
    because there are no words coming out
    whenever I open my mouth
    My voice gets mude and I just let it fade

    My heart is crowded with sadness
    there's no more joy, just hopeless
    sun's light is gone away
    and moon sparkling shine is hidden from me

    I can't find a sense anymore
    where did I lose the road?
    Who I am? I don't even know
    I just see a black shadow covering me.    ​
     
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    denisse, Nov 23, 2014
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  2. Javier Pino

    Javier Pino Invitado

    I just see a beautiful poem. Congratulations, Denisse.
     
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    Javier Pino, Nov 23, 2014
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  3. Lourdes C

    Lourdes C POETISA DEL AMOR

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    It is a beautiful and sad poem.
    Your heart spoke. Thank you for sharing.
    Blessings.
     
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    Lourdes C, Nov 23, 2014
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    Brise Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    yeah, very sweet. Kiss
     
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    Brise, Nov 25, 2014

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