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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Ryahsseto, Aug 8, 2008. Replies: 2 | Views: 761

  1. Ryahsseto

    Ryahsseto Poeta recién llegado

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    Making and Breaking Promises.

    What Could I Do?

    What Could You Do?

    What I am Suppose To Be ?

    You are Not Quite Sure

    I`m not Telling the Truth...



    How can I Spend my Time Without You?

    even in My Drreams You are...

    even they´re Silly... they´re Lovely at the time...



    Go On! Go On My Dear! Come on... And Help Me...    ​
     
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    Ryahsseto, Aug 8, 2008
  2. LoryCross

    LoryCross Poeta recién llegado

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    Pero si esto es melacálico, hermoso... nada silly. Una cosa... tal vez el tipeo te traicionó en el antepenúltino y penúltimo verso.
     
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    LoryCross, Aug 8, 2008
  3. Gustavo Cervantes

    Gustavo Cervantes Invitado

    nice...

    Keep trying...


    peace..
     
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    Gustavo Cervantes, Aug 8, 2008

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