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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Domenech, Nov 8, 2013. Replies: 1 | Views: 1641

  1. Domenech

    Domenech Poeta recién llegado

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    Let's pretend we aren't subtly aware of each other,
    And exchange in front of people the mildest salutations.
    Let's play the appearances while concealing inside
    The boiling increase of our innermost desire.


    Let's fool the world in mind reading glances,
    In unspoken words talking out loud.
    Let's see the morrow thru, hoping for a chance
    Of getting involved and mended again.


    Let me reach your hand in disguise,
    In that secret, warm place of slumber
    And when entwined let's share the moment,
    A forever too short of bottomless hunger.
     
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  2. Alizée

    Alizée ⊙ Humαlıen ⊙ ༻✦༺ ♡ WɩꙆt Aᖾωᥲ ♡ ∞ ֎

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    Domenech:
    It is a splendid writing, I almost felt it like mine
    I identify in some lines and equate it with my feelings
    Thank you very much for sharing, receive infinite stars,
    my affectionate and my "lit" smile

    Ps. De elogio el título, ambiguo, como esos acertijos que tanto me gustan y muy ad hoc con el escrito. Me gusta el juego de palabras.


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